Thank you for your application! Unfortunately we need some more information before we can make our decision.
►► While we felt that your history section was good, we require revisions to your character's world information and personality section. ►► For the world overview, we'd like to know more about the setting, especially information pertaining to how magic plays a part in the world, clans, the magic surge, and the resulting political landscape. ►► In terms of personality, we would like to see more detail on the traits, specifically citing original canon examples rather than ones taken from the TDM that can back up the listed characteristics.
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Thank you for your application! Unfortunately we need some more information before we can make our decision.
You have 48 hours to reply to this comment with the requested revisions.
Either adding the revisions in a comment below or clearly marked in a revised version of your application.
If you require an extension of this deadline, please contact the Zhautas mods privately.
We hope to hear from you soon!